Meet Me in White Spaces
If snow falls on cedars, let me be pine,
a stolid passion in the coming storm–
to stand where planted, roots gone pediform–
until the wind that sways these limbs consigns
these arches into motion, wild moon shine
awakening what’s petrified & worn
to dance outside the lines, once dendriform
but free verse, now, our poetry aligned.
There is a hidden glen within our words–
a bowl to catch the wind, the rain, the light–
a sanctuary where the trees lift swords
of branches in salute to stars & night.
& when the clouds embrace to break at last
that space will sow the seems once overcast.
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I’d meet you there. Nice poem!
😂 my hetero writer husband. Love ya, man. And glad you joined us “poets” *said in perfect, unnamed visiting fiction writer distaste* this year!
Oooh I like image “a bowl to catch the wind”
Thank you, Kim! 🙏
To dance outside the lines, once dendriform – I love this poem and this line!
Thank you, Morgan ☺️
Now why would you like that line? 😂
I’ve felt…locked up, lately. In my life and, finally, even in my writing. The truth in that line sings for me this June, as well 💙
It’s certainly not a mystery why I would love it! And love it to the point of coming back to read it again today.
🥹 I’m glad.
Not much a poet can wish than to have repeat readings.
Once again, you craft a poem that exudes beauty beyond measure.
“a sanctuary where the trees lift swords
of branches in salute to stars & night.”
I just LOVE this image. What a soft, but powerful piece. Brilliant, Joseph. Stunning as always.
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Glad you enjoyed it 🙏
Particularly that one image because, for whatever reason, I was unsure it would translate or fit into the whole. Sometimes you can see something so, so very clearly in your head but saying it in a way (and English) that shares the image with the reader is downright difficult. I was afraid it would just come off “Babes in Toyland” 😂
Thank you for always responding and making me believe in my voice.
The line is perfect. Zero “Babes in Toyland” vibes detected. Keep believing in your voice and your gifted writing abilities. Your work is stunning. I enjoy reading your work each year.
Oh my goodness. This is so beautiful. Found myself clinging to each word as I read, nodding along in agreement and excitement each word held because of the way you uniquely used them.
The attempts with the bowl
The dancing outside lines
Trees saluting…
A sanctuary indeed.
Thank you, Mary! ☺️
Certain ones we write stick with us. Foreseeing this one being amid the tops for me. So glad you enjoyed it.