[Frankly, Brooklyn, you’re too damn much]
after Diane Seuss
Frankly, Brooklyn, you’re too damn much. Elaborate
cardamom bun and a cappuccino that too easily
deflates. I was thrifting, now retreating to a couch
where I feel I must chat up the couple next to me.
It has to do with Kierkegaard and, of course,
over-extracts from there. The one, a philosopher.
The other, a poet. Oh, you too? And have you read
Diane Seuss as he pulls this gem from his bag.
Stark, double-spaced sonnets march in royal defiance
of titles across 130 nonchalant pages. Each ending
a slap somewhere—the thigh, my heart, often the
face. Oh, Diane—you crack of black pepper! Such
serendipities in this unpredictable life of mine. My
existence, my finishing sugar—you so raw and fine.
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Wow! Love it. Amazing job.
Fantastic! So much fun to read- I especially love the ending
“Oh, Diane—you crack of black pepper! Such
serendipities in this unpredictable life of mine. My
existence, my finishing sugar—you so raw and fine.”
She IS a crack of black pepper!
I know!! It tickled me to come to this conclusion. : )