There was a garden in my dream
planted by a friend, absent—
in his place I tended it. But it lacked
dirt and water. Shovels full from here
to there, so little to fill the holes
around the plants. And water, hose
stretched from the outside faucet
of my grandmother’s house,
to ease parched blooms and one broken
stem and blossom. “Maybe it will root,”
someone said, among the watching
brothers. I found a pot
and planted it.
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Beautiful and tender.
Love the connection to grandma’s house.
Thank you for writing this one.
It’s only natural for you to include a trip to your past among your travels!
Wonderful, Gregory!
Always eager to see your daily Italian musing, Greg.
Love:
absent—
in his place I tended it
and the ending where one of the watching brothers comments.
following the details of the gardening tools, I like the simple syntax and concision of the last line and a half
I love how this ends, Greg, because it lets my imagination soar.
I love the tenderness here