Elegy for a Junk Car
I called you Champagne, the factory’s glam
name for your golden hue. You hummed
& purred, you caught the light just so,
your doors shut with a satisfying thump,
sealing me inside you, safe from the world.
But those years on Chicago’s potholed streets
were hard on us both. Instead of gliding
on air like a magic carpet, you bounced
& shimmied like a voguer on Halsted Street,
your struts shot, your axles grinding, your
tires as slick as the rain itself. We escaped
to Kentucky on fumes & I drove you into
the ground, left you for dead in the driveway
two whole years. Forgive me, sweet chariot.
I couldn’t afford to fix you—I couldn’t
afford to fix myself—but I couldn’t let you
go. Acquiring a coat of tree sap, dry leaves
& regret, you stood for my old life, when
I could go anywhere, anytime. In the end
I gave you to another man, some guy who
could look after you the way you deserve.
I bathed you, shined you up one last time,
then waved, old girl, as he towed you away.
You looked as lovely as the day we met.
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Funny how we love our cars. I have had many over the years, and now have my dream car, but for some strange reason I have a soft place in my heart for a Honda Civic I drove at the beginning of my career. If I could get it back, I would do so in a heartbeat.
I know what you mean, Wayne.
Thanks darlin. I will definitely collect on that promise of a hug.
There’s so much I love about this! The tragedy, the comedy. You admit it all and bravely let go. A big hug is coming!
Jeez, I responded to you on Wayne’s comment above! Anyway I assume you both know who I meant. 😏
Beautiful colors in details, and an arresting turn – Forgive me, sweet chariot.
Thanks, Manny!
Oh !!!!!!
Beautiful.
Thank you for writing this.
We need a copy of it and we will ceremony ” Champagne” into a rising smoke of gratitude.
A life well lived , a purpose fulfilled.
She brought you home.
There you go again, Coleman, making me cry…
Sure do like the images you paint of Champagne in her former days and how her body changed with age. Bounced and shimmied, Struts shot axels grinding.
Sounds like someone should do me a favor and give me to another man to look… ah I’m fine rotting where I am.
Ah Catherine, you’re far from rotting. You’re fermenting beautifully, becoming an intoxicating spirit with the years 😏 I love you, darlin, almost as much as I loved You Know Who…
Ahh, and I really hate to admit loving anyone, but I got a soft spot in my heart for you, too. But I’m damn glad I wasn’t one of your cars. Poor Champagne. Love can be so cruel.
Afraid so.
love really is a 9-letter name.. 🙂
Exactly, Dustin…
I, too, name my cars, May the other man treat Champagne as well!
Love:
bounced
& shimmied like a voguer on Halsted Street,
your struts shot, your axles grinding, your
tires as slick as the rain itself.
Acquiring a coat of tree sap, dry leaves
& regret
If he doesn’t, Pam, he’ll be hearing from me 😏
As he should!
This is so touching, Kevin. It’s amazing the relationship we have with our cars — you get it across so very well!
Thanks, Bill. I do miss her.
You show with such love how our vehicles become our dear friends, parts of ourselves, in certain times and places, none of it lasting long enough. I really like this, especially the elevated “Forgive me, sweet chariot” which could be funny but here holds such tenderness.
Thanks, Sue! I guess the chariot reference sits right on the line between comedy and, if not tragedy, something close.
Lovely, nostalgic piece. The last lines, so beautiful and heartfelt! And that title — an elegy for a “junk car” — left me thinking — another person’s trash, another’s treasure. . . . inspires me to write an elegy myself. I enjoyed this immensely!
Go for it, Michele! Lord knows we all have plenty to grieve for.
So much about this to love, Kevin. From the bubbly beginning to the sap-covered abandonment and then the photo finish.
Thanks, Nancy!
Great poem, Kevin, full of dynamic sounds. I love “you bounced/& shimmied like a voguer on Halsted Street”
Thanks Shaun!