III, II, I; Manifest & Destiny
“Intimacy, whether found or lost,
is a sure thing.”
– Stacey D’Erasmo, on writing
III.
it’s 3 a.m., & i’m riding
the rings of Saturn.
at 2 a.m., i’d given up
sleep. i needed answers.
i’d started outsourcing
experience.
anyone who’s dated
online—knows—that
moment when you ask
to take a step further:
to move to the phone
revealing & finding
voice; it’s when you step
from fantasy to tangible,
when an interest becomes
a person. in short: More.
it’s impossible to hear them
& not, in a way, know them.
i have your words.
i have description
of voice. so i search
google gold dust woman.
sound app for waves on a shore—
chorus of crickets at night~
breeze to stir the trees.
& NASA, now, to settle
beneath blankets of space—
too much space & too much
silence; you’d shared
shades of silence, too.
but silence, the kind
of silences you shared
are the secrets of intimacy
& proximity we do not (yet)
have.
it’s 3 a.m., & i’m still
laying in the dark
of questions & possibility.
*** *** ***
II.
Scribe it in blood—
carve it in flesh.
This breath.
This wish.
This runic landscape
just beneath skin,
like temples,
like labyrinths
of possibility
buried beneath
viscera
& tendon
connecting spirit
& bone.
Paint it in need,
drown it in release.
You
& Me
subsumed by
We.
*** *** ***
I.
There is a place
between here & there
where we arrive
at a choice.
Meet me at the tree
(your favorite tree, or
the willow that weeps
from my childhood);
choose to
fall
into its cradle space.
There’s a knot
in a trunk
of hope & the sun
is waiting
for an us.
A tiny opening/a light wish:
I’ve been lost in the semblance, the memory, of a kiss
that has not been discovered—between lips that have only
yet imagined the secrets whispered, one pair to the other,
& first taste of a mirrored dance.
Stop imagining.
Come
with me
there, where we forget all that’s intellectual or logical or effectual &
choose
this
refrain:
Hands, together, palm to palm, face to face, forgetting
anything but the flight along legs open to wonder / or pressed
between pages, against chests, to remember, room left only
for the energy of souls, drawing nigh & nigher, that ev’ry wing’ed breath
might break into fire; that what is written, story to story, poem to poem, gasp
to contented gasp, would set words reeling~~spinning~~Be
something more than what we, as post-romantic writers, can
create
after the reality
of once
or the fantasy
of once upons
to the only once
that matters:
The Once
More.
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All italicized words or phrases borrowed from another poet.
One unnamed. One I don’t need to identify as Elizabeth Barrett Browning.
Reading this is a wonderful experience, falling through the open spaces, landing gently upon the “once more”…
made this morning magical
If my writing, my wish, can do anything, at all, it is that it might reawaken wonder, and wonder is
Magic.
Thank you, Leah.
For letting me know, as Terry Brooks says,
“Sometimes the Magic Works.”
My goodness, Joseph. My lungs simply cannot find air to fill them. Just…stunning. Truly. Heartfelt. The longing, the hope, the ache, are gorgeously curated in this one. Browning, too! Oh, my stars! I studied her work rather extensively in my undergraduate days.
This highlights June’s duality; It’s the space where possibility lies, where willow trees (my favorite) bend and weep for all that exists in this gorgeous realm– where the “real world” can’t tarnish them…or reach them in real time.
This poem is one that will stay with me for all of my days. I don’t think I’ll ever read anything that will echo as beautifully in my soul as this. You managed to successfully send Neruda’s works– longstanding as my “to never be dethroned” poetic favorites– toppling from their pedestal; something I never thought possible. And yet, so real. So possible. Here. In June.
Looking forward to tomorrow, once more.
So much more to say, but words escape me. The irony. 🤦🏻♀️
Can we just sum it up with “Ditto.”
I don’t know how to even reply back. Anything I’d say feels it would ruin what you replied.
Thank you, H. For PoMo 2024. And regardless where two days or further tomorrows may go…
It’s been a ride.
Stolen from the ticket salesman.
And never forgotten.
You’ve fanned…whatever this is…inside…back to life (see “I Remember When I Could Write” and where I was mere weeks ago.
Knowing….that it went farther than my laptop. And as deeply as you say…
It’s all I have to have.
Though will never be all
I want.
🤐😶
💕🪐
Saturn has the sound, but her soul is most assuredly ruled by Mars. What an honor to write alongside you, Joseph. Two days remain.
So, Aries??
That….is more interesting than you can know.
Yes. Aries. An early April Aries.
My curiosity is piqued…
A story.
For another day.
Perhaps.
If such a day
became more
than perhaps.
Fair.
Decidedly not fair hahaha.
But the fair we get for now.
Fair…ish? 😂
Fair-ish 😉😘
Wonderful description of hope and love – movement from fantasy of it to reality. Thank you for sharing this.
*Smiles* Thank you, Alissa. <3
Meticulously polished so that a single word or punctuation mark or line break trips the reader–I’m left am left breathless by the last line, especially after the breathtaking “refrain.”
🥹 thank you, Sue.