Emptyness
Down the pine tree
Lined lane
From home
He left
In the night
Taking with him
A few pieces of furniture
His clothes …….
Tail lights
Faded into Darkness
Never to return…
Leaving broken hearts
Occupying a house.
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What a heartbreak of a poem. You do so much with so few words.
Truly heartbreaking
Taking with him
A few pieces of furniture
His clothes …….
Tail lights
Faded into Darkness
Love the description and economy compressed here!
Beautiful and succinct rendition of loss. Your description of his taillights fading down the pine tree lined lane gives a sense of time and separation.