After (or, How I May Be Feeling Tomorrow…)
Too soon I think, the thunder has rolled through, passed me by.
Static electricity drains from the air
and the hairs on my arms can lay down flat again.
Summer heat closes back in around the disappearing tunnel made by a June tempest so great it slowed the whole earth’s orbit for a little while.
The sky is clearing, but I feel like I’m losing. Flat again.
Bronte turns back into a regular girl.
I’ve been chasing storms
learning how lightly to touch a heavy-laden cloud to release its cooling cargo.
Just one fingertip, maybe two, a tiny pinch,
any more force and the bubble bursts, the deluge splashes away, uncatchable.
I’m left drenched, but not quenched
I’ve been practicing
holding lightning rods, flying kites, trying keys
from my rooftop on tiptoes
amniotic and emerging
trusting the wind to catch me up.
I think I became the lightning for one bright moment
basking in the glow of explosion.
The sky is clearing, and I feel like I’m losing.
Tomorrow, storm season will be over.
(I offer my thanks to every poet who has shared their work this month; I’ve been entirely inspired, challenged, and moved. This has been a wonderful time of learning and growth and I’ll miss the daily rush of reading your poems and sharing mine!)
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Wow, this is gorgeous! Fantastic images!!
Thank you! It’s been wonderful to write alongside you this month!
had to laugh at “and the hairs on my arms can lay down flat again” 🙂
😂
Thank you for all your great comments this month. It’s been a wonderful time writing alongside you!
Love:
I’ve been chasing storms
Just one fingertip, maybe two, a tiny pinch,
Thank you Pam! Thank you for sharing your beautiful poems this month!
This is so wonderfully descriptive
of the feeling of getting through June’s
poetry and life. So far it keeps happening.
(Thanks for reading mine today.)
Thank you! As hard as it is to keep up this pace, it will also be hard to let it go!
Leah, this is stunning writing.
The sky is clear – and I feel like I’m losing gave me chills. ❤️
Thank you so much 💛 I’ve loved reading your work this month!
Awww! Everyone loves this poem, that is clear. Was wonderful reading your poems. I think you’re right though, drenched not quenched. Great way to put it!
Thank you! 💛
Love “drenched but not quenched”! And thank you for sharing your work with us too
Thank you! 💛
Beautiful–that last stanza, powerful.
I’ve enjoyed your poetry this month!
Thank you, Michele! I’ve loved reading and writing alongside you this month!
I absolutely love this! The 2nd and 3rd stanzas are so full of incredible images. I’ve loved reading your poetry this year – see you next June!
Thank you, Nancy! I can’t wait for next year! I hope all all these wonderful poets will be back again 💛. I’ve really enjoyed reading your work this month!
Enjoyed getting to know you through your beautiful and creative words!
Thank you Sylvia! Thank you for sharing your beautiful work as well!
Wonderful poem, Leah. Thanks for your poems and comments this month!
Thank you, Kevin! I really appreciated your feedback and comments this month! Already looking forward to next June 😊
Excellent work here: you capture this month for us so well. I’ve really enjoyed your poems this month and look forward to reading next year.
Thank you Sue! Same- I really appreciate your kind words and look forward to more of your work too!
All this, too. There will definitely be a long and heavy PoMo hangover this year. Bittersweet of the usual more…viscous and cloying and clearing and beautiful.
Enjoyed your pieces. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you! It’s been an incredible experience. Really looking forward to reading more of your work in the future!
What a gorgeous and apt poem. Thank you for sharing it!
Thank you so much!
I’ve really enjoyed reading you work this year!
Thank you Alissa! I’ve loved ready your work too!
This is one of the best descriptions of The Feeling I think I have read. It’s been a pleasure to read your work and share LexPoMo with you!
Thank you Shaun! It’s been an unforgettable moth and I can’t wait until we can do this again next year. I’ve been so inspired by you and this incredible group of poets!
Leah! This is SO WILDLY GOOOOD! Love it! Hell yeah. What Shaun said. Best description of this month’s experience. So many great lines (and line breaks) here. I can’t even pick a favorite. But all the short phrases really hit. “Flat again.” “I’ve been practicing” with that line break etc. Good good. Yay! Awesome to meet you. Thanks for your kind support this month. I look forward to connecting in person when I’m back in Kentucky. Best of luck on your writing project too. Cheers!
Thank you Emily! 💛 Looking forward to connecting again one of these days!