Sleepless
So the legs twitch
like rabbits punching
above their weight.
That creeping itch
slapping each nod
daring it to try
again.
10 thoughts on "Sleepless"
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Day one insomnia poems are hitting hard right now. Good start
Thank you
Your poem reminds me that I need to include two rabbits in a poem I am crafting in my thoughts.
Thanks! Glad this gave you a chance to hop back to the rabbit idea! 🐇
great description (“rabbits punching/ above their weight”) of the restless leg syndrome that I experience after a day of sitting too much
Exactly!
Thanks!
Terrific! Concise! Witty!
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Wonderful way to start!
Thanks!