Out of Chaos Come Order
His room was always a royal mess
& hard as he tried he couldn’t tame
the onslaught of junk, agglomeration
of books & notes, mismatched socks
& tattered T-shirts, candy wrappers
& shoes with frayed laces.
He orchestrated a melodic path out
with perfectly organized compact discs,
the 98 satiny circles placed
in sheltered sleeves. When he unzipped
the black leather-padded case
he could view the entire collection.
While his room swirled in rubble
& rebellious mayhem the soundtrack
of his life was grouped & classified
–- from Prince to Big Bill Broonzy
to Nirvana. Every genre sang with precision
from his beautiful & jumbled brain.
18 thoughts on "Out of Chaos Come Order"
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I love how precisely you contrast the whirlwind of the physical with the meticulous harmony of the music collection!
You have captured this. And the organized poem fits it perfectly.
Beautifully detailed in classically dense Bryant style. You are back, baby!
Gorgeous! And a scene I know all too well!
Feel like I’m peeking into my teenage-self’s bedroom! Such a nice portrait, Linda. So nice to read you again!
A bio in verse, I know this guy, thanks to you.
Such a clear and relatable character sketch through the description of his environment and methods. It also puts me back in time. 🙂 Love it.
Great portrait of ‘his beautiful & jumbled brain’
Music shall set us free, however we organize it. Wonderful to read your work again, Linda. Poetry bathing in June!
I love beautiful and jumbled brains
I resemble this character. Music, movies, TV, and most of all poetry brought some semblance of order into the chaos of my life. Good read, Linda.
I love the series of ampersands on the left margin, then the one midline at the end.
Brilliant layering of images
Ohhh this. Love the relatability we can have to the “messy kid.” With the recognition of the *inability* to tame it (My ADHD daughter with Dyslexia can relate… and honestly so can I, lol). Additionally, with the noticing of the order maintained in what he covets most. Its is a beautiful contrast. And if we all looked a little closer, I think we could recognize the splats of order sprinkled in the chaos.
Love reading your poetry! So excited for June!
Good to read your poems again!
I love all of the juxtapositions in the piece Linda.
Hi Linda, great to meet you thru this poem. I’m humbied by your obvious excellence use/regard for language. Elegant. Concise. Succinct. I could even picture the dust beside the wrappers!
Yes!
He orchestrated a melodic path out