Nature Interrupted
Eleven-year-old
Fishes from an aluminum Jon boat,
In Dorcheat Bayou in south Arkansas.
Red and white float drifts on the water
As bored as he is.
He watches the bank for water moccasins –
Danger may lurk.
Mosquitos keep him slapping
Dragonflies flit by
Frogs and crickets and other critters
Provide sound effects –
A low hum of nature in the otherwise silent world.
Until the roar, the unexpected, ear-splitting roar
Of a fighter jet from Barksdale tearing by
Just above the tree line
Dropping flourbags to the earth.
Practicing for Vietnam.
10 thoughts on "Nature Interrupted"
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That ear splitting roar so disrupts the quiet reverie you’ve set up. Love it.
Thank you!
Perfect setup and perfect payoff.
” Danger may lurk ”
Brilliant contextual foreshadow.
Wow – what kind words!
Loved the progression of this piece and the last line.
That last line is a killer, Wayne.
Thank you, Kevin.
Good to read your poetry again this year! This poem has a great sense of place. The surprise behind tells it all.
You do great job building the tension and mood here, and the turn of the last line packs a punch.
oh, the journey of that poem! Brava. The surprise ending was a gut punch.