Flower Child
The plants were free and dying
Pushed to the side for any takers
Some just limp leafless stems
So I bundled them home
Because that’s what I do these days
Maybe I pampered them too much
Maybe it was blasting We Shall Overcome
Or Richie Havens’ Freedom
Or all that Bob Dylan
One day I had control of the house
The next – instant insurgency
Window sills blooming revolution
Pansies – those cheery protestors
Were the first faces to lead the uprising
Overthrowing their humble beginnings
The Christmas cactus staged a coup
Blooms like birds dashing in all directions
And it wasn’t even winter
The orchids, exotic elitists
Thin foreign cigarettes dangling
Anarchy on their pouty lips
Foxglove fingers raised
In colorful opposition
Declaring diversity
Roses vined their unrest
Through the laces in my shoes
Each step a fragrant minefield
Even the mums have mutinied
Breaking their silence
Like chanting monks
Just a dull woman
I wander through the rooms
Intoxicated by their rainbow awakening
Oh my sweet sweet rebels
My fragrant subversions
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Vivid imagery abounds
Steady rhythm propels
This poem made my day
Wonderful! “My fragrant subversions.” !!!
(Also, free plants are the best!)
Love how each plant variety has its own type of subversion! And “Blooms like birds dashing in all directions ” -just gorgeous!
You are anything but a dull woman!
Oh, how I love this- the rich imagery, the subtle metaphors,
the playful, yet realistic descriptions…to have your window
sills blooming revolution gives us hope.
I love this! Each flower is described so perceptively and I can just see the jungle your home has become.
I love your descriptions here–especially the orchids–and the way you connect “…blooming revolution/Pansies…”
Love the title! ‘blasting we shall overcome’ ..’cigarettes dangling’, and, let’s just make this clear, you ain’t no dull woman, so it has to be about someone else, Queen.
Beautiful!
That last couplet is perfection.
This poem really strikes a powerful tone. I felt you!
Ahhh….one of my favorite flowers, pansies presented gloriously!
Pansies – those cheery protestors
Were the first faces to lead the uprising
Overthrowing their humble beginnings
Love:
I bundled them home
Because that’s what I do these days
and
the revolution that followed!
Next to the orchids of the dangling cigarettes, I love the chanting monk mums best. But I find those roses vining through your shoelaces the most subversive.
Love the personification and just the idea of all that life force. Brilliant!
What fun–all the specific plant imagery and their individual “insurgency.”
Beautiful! I smiled the whole way through. Love especially: “Pansies – those cheery protestors” (perhaps because mine did protest this year!)
I can just see how beautiful these plants must be! Love this!
Flower power exists for those who see. Good poem