Phoenix
Tiptoed along the tile floor in the bathroom,
barely breathing as I tried not to wake you,
tears leaking down my face almost as quickly
as the drip from the rusty faucet in the sink.
It didn’t work.
You barreled down the hallway
just to tell me I’d be prettier
if I exfoliated once in awhile,
ignoring my shoulders
trembling at the timbre of your voice,
the coarseness of the growl
rising from your core with the force
of a dragon robbed of a piece of gold
as you blinked and realized I was crying.
I kept the gold piece long after you were gone,
for it reminds me, with its jagged edges
that glisten even in the dark before dawn,
that I survived the flames.
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The imagery in this poem is stunning. It drives the emotion really nicely. Well done.
Thank you so much!
I already thought the first mention of the gold coin was a solid, solid image. But then starting the next stanza with keeping the coin, that was *chef’s kiss*
Thanks for reading, and the feedback!