It Was a Moment
The sound began many conversations
as they walked the creamy ocean shore, cool, sandy, windy
the roar, the waves slightly throwing them off balance
the wind in her hair always in tangles.
Why do they call different places the sound?
The smell of salt in the air
how it clouded her glasses
& the feel of gritty between her toes each night.
Perhaps each ocean has its own rhapsody beat.
The 3 of them
on the porch, around the table, the walk to town,
catching his trip, retrieving his phone
the marsh, the hike
good photos & the bad photo, taken by a passerby
offering to help, cutting the top of the lighthouse off.
Deleted.
Back at the beach house,
the quiet sound of her writing upstairs in the orchid room
Can I say I love you, her poem began.
the sizzle of fish frying in the kitchen
the click of his typing.
driving the long road home
funky music, jazz & Chopin
an occasional Allman Brothers. Eat a Peach
as the sunset turned dusk at an empty truck stop
home by midnight
7 days, 3 old people 85, 75, 65.
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Beautiful images, there’s so much heart in this poem! I feel like I’m there with you.
Idyllic setting.
Poetry.
Wonderfully beautiful.
I feel the sand, the wind and the fish frying!
Wanderers all…
Laverne, Wow! Fantastic! A keeper for me! Love how your style lets me as the reader complete the imagining imagining video of the evolving scene contribute to make the whole…Pictures, feelings, context. And as i was a hippie, i really relate to this telling. The rythm of your writing is right there!