#FF9595 – Rose Colored Romances
You were swimming in pools of grace.
You want to believe you brought liquor to your face because you lost.
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You were swimming in pools of grace.
You want to believe you brought liquor to your face because you lost.
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So serene until it’s not. Oh, those rose-colored anythings.
Manny, I love your work.
It’s actually a direct, no-nonsense love poem. Likewise I love your Michele.
Oh my. The poem feels like a slap. More than a lesson, a response to an insult. Very effective.
That is a way to take it. This is about someone who drank, and the truth I think we lose things, but there is much to hold to, is very much there.
Yes I understood the drinking. And it feels like a reprimand- because you thought you lost!
That’s right! More like a velvet hammer! K-plush!
Love the idea of swimming in pools of grace. So easily relatable I take it for granted,
great lines ‘pools of grace’ and ‘liquor to your face’