Estrangement Among Killer Whales
Male orcas usually stay with their mothers.
They only leave to mate
but they return, circling close.
We sighted them by Lime Kiln lighthouse.
They showed off, leaping from
the Puget Sound like a giant corkscrew,
side-flopping, tail-slapping, back-
diving to show wonder, glee or relish.
We stayed on the shore until sundown,
waiting for the sudden explosion of them,
water spraying from every fin & dorsal.
We pinky-promised to keep together in the pod.
But there were many threats — oil spills, uproars
from boats, coastal storms. Mother
& son, we moved apart during the overruling noise
& blinding afternoon fog.
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i love killer whales. such longing and sadness and difficult threats facing them 🙁 <3
Oh! This is where you shine. The Linda twinning weave. Wonderful and submitable.
Beautiful and heart-full. Love the giant corkscrew of them.
Gorgeous and sad. The mirroring effect, whales and humans, is devastating.
The Orca is one of my all-time favorite animals. I love this poem. Heart-wrenching!
I felt like I was there – seeing and feeling it too
Like so much the description of whale watching in stanzas 2 & 3 & the whales being whales.
Love orcas and learned something new:
Male orcas usually stay with their mothers.
They only leave to mate
but they return, circling close.
Brilliant weaving:
We pinky-promised to keep together in the pod.
But there were many threats — oil spills, uproars
from boats, coastal storms. Mother
& son, we moved apart during the overruling noise
& blinding afternoon fog.
side-flopping, tail-slapping, back-
diving to show wonder, glee or relish
The use of form and precision of detailed language skillfully SHOWS is the emotions behind the mother-son connection.
Love the breakaway ending.
You’ve captured how environmental violence echoes in the personal: “the sudden explosion” of whales, the stunning conclusion of “blinding afternoon fog.”
Enjoyed the specific images and weaving of human connection.
This communicates beautifully the challenges and distractors facing a parent and child relationship- regrets and forgiveness.