Stand Up Tall
Grandmother said
dress your best when you go to town
hold your head high
driving 7 miles from the small house at
the edge of the cotton field
Granddaddy plowed rigorously
when the field dried
& he could no longer plow
he became a magician
making school children laugh until
he lost his mind & was institutionalized
Grandmother, the most righteous
her father, a missionary to Indians
her ancestors, slave-owners
in ’38 her husband, his money lost to
crooked bankers
that never recorded his payments
drove that dirt lane in their black cars
family possessions – passed down
heirlooms & old quilts
saved for decades
were hauled away.
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This has a Steinbeck feel, like an old photo tucked in a Bible.
Another good one and again I like the spacing…like breathing.
coincidentally, Coleman, we recently watche grapes of wrath
Yes yes. What Coleman said, and the pain and pride in equal measures.
I love the straightforward storytelling that shares the good and bad and ugly. It’s very well done. I love the passage of time in the story. The verse about your grandfather was masterful!
Great story. Those damn bankers!
But the memories and characters haven’t been hauled away: You have preserved them in this story,
good point, greg
What an incredible scene and history…
And
The gut-punch here!!
Oof.
Nice title.
Sometimes that’s all there is to do but stand tall
My memaw said the same things to us! Love this generational storytelling.
it’s amazing how things get passed down and so many of us got the same messages.
Oooo, Laverne! A great American tale! Short, but Vast . Concise descriptive lines together presenting a nearl.
epic picture withcmplex dimens— cultural, generational,