Pop’s Elephant
Adayre is generous with
his chalk today: here, Pop,
he offers. Last visit, he had declined
my offer to draw.
No Pop he said. And
his no was as firm as a banker’s stamp.
Although he was
kinder than a banker;
his no was gentle,
as if forced upon him
by dire circumstances.
Today, in response to such graciousness, I make
an attempt at an elephant. At least I try for
large floppy ears 😊
and something that is supposed to be a trunk.
Adayre is very accepting—elephants come
in all sorts of shapes, he must figure.
And this is Pop’s, not to be
scorned or thought inferior
just because his trunk looks more
like a garden hose
and his head a bit like an orange melon
with suspicious growths sprouting
out from the sides.
Adayre doesn’t regret the offer of chalk.
He even offers me more. If he were older
I’d suspect an artistic critique, but two-year-olds
don’t think like that.
He knows I did my best.
Why would I not?
And maybe in his two-year-old heart,
he thinks a world
populated by Pop’s elephants
wouldn’t be so bad.
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Ah, the purity and innocence of children. This is a really cute poem, an early reason to smile this morning. Thank you very much for sharing!
Thank you. It really looked more like an anteater than an elephant.
I like this poem so much! And, can relate to it—I have 2 grand-boys, 4 and 4 1/2 and sometimes they will dump out the chalk and jazz up the sidewalk. They ask me to draw with them sometimes. My one grandson will ask me to draw specific things and gets upset if it is not what he pictured! My other grandson is pretty free form, interesting too —dad is artist, mom is singer. I like how you characterize the 2 year old sensibility. The line—he knows I did my best—so important in life, we are all trying to do our best on any given day, using the chalk we were given!
The chalk was a problem! Thanks
Delightful! ‘Firm as a banker,s stamp’
I really enjoyed this poem. I like the way you withheld the important info until the end. You’re a great storyteller.
Thanks, Jim.
Delightful. So tender, on your part and his.
Another delightful glimpse into Pops and grandson! Thank you.
Wonderful rendering of his two-year-old heart, and yours.