Sheets of rain
My windshield splatters
Rain split by Sunshine peering
Through my dilated
Eyes straining is it red or green?
Made it home safely this time.
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My windshield splatters
Rain split by Sunshine peering
Through my dilated
Eyes straining is it red or green?
Made it home safely this time.
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Ha!
I love how you quietly reveal what’s going on–
May you always get there and home again safe!
Thx and am trying tankas
Good use of the form to extend a common experience into a revealing moment.
Thanks! That’s what I was hoping to do!
Ugghh – I feel your pain.
. . .windshield splatters
Rain split by Sunshine
I can feel the sheets of rain in the “s” sounds
I hate driving in the rain! Safe travels, my friend!
Short poem but important, familiar situation. Good job.