Unruly
They will not behave, these words
of mine. They fight or flee,
refuse to bring the music in my
head to the page, and I begin to think
I’d be better off, more useful
to society pouring coffee and toasting
bagels, until the rhythmic thunk-thunk
of their fall through the slicer
reminds me of music . . .
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Exactly, Gwyneth! Writing poems ain’t easy until it is.
Yes, exactly!
Inspiration really can be found anywhere, but, yeah, actually translating that to words can indeed be very difficult!
I love how in stanza 1, the lines end in stressed syllables, whereas in stanza 2, most of the lines do not and take on a more supple rhythm
You’ve found the music in this one!
Perfectly described, Gwyneth!