The Mother in Summer
The mother in summer wears shades
as if to say she has done this before,
Wears her human skin and paints her toenails
as if to say she goes here and in another life,
she might be fun, or something like it.
They go to the park, the pool, and it’s a little indecent,
she thinks privately, all this flesh,
but it’s nothing that wasn’t there before – just the crowd
in different phases of exposure.
She has heard that some feel this way in winter,
disappearing into darkness as she comes alive,
different broods of cicadas occasionally overlapping,
vibrating and screaming in turn.
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Fantastic, Arwen. This is my new favorite poem of yours.
Love this, especially the turn of “or something like it “
I was expecting this be a light weight poem. It wasn’t. It’s powerful and very excellent.
Love the imagery
So good. Subtlety and revelation.
Great poem.
“The mother in summer wears shades
as if to say she has done this before,”
You had be hooked from the beginning. Fabulous!
Just marvelous.
A lot to admire here– Thank you!
I wrote this at the pool yesterday and edited and fiddled around with it until it ended back up in its original state lol. Thank you all!
Your process paid off tremendously. It’s a great poem!
The whole poem has a kinetic energy, much like final image! I love it.
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