wink
Dreamt I lost the handbag my grandmother left me –
the beaded one with the broken clasp and a wine stain.
I looked in the flowerbed she planted with rose-red geraniums
and behind the gas station she used to run in coveralls and perfectly curled hair.
Searched the old house she raised my father in
with fried eggs, and card games, and something you couldn’t quite call love.
When I found it, full of glass eyeballs (the sort favored by taxidermists), I cried,
thinking of all the small creatures that had passed through her hands.
Who would ever keep a purse full of eyeballs?
I really didn’t know her all that well.
But she read my first poem, when I was 8
and said she loved it.
At the bottom of the purse, with the unblinking conclave
was a diamond- unset.
Still sparkling amidst the menagerie of her wildcard tastes.
Cosmic wink, from wherever she is now.
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oh wow. This is just tremendous. I love the little personal details. I can see her so clearly, and understand how these memories would take hold. I love the idea of a “cosmic wink.”
Thank you so much!
Oh my! I love this–the searching in quirky places (such great imagery) and the surprise of the eyeballs. This line hit me most of all: “But she read my first poem, when I was 8 / and said she loved it.” . . . And then the diamond and the wink. WONDERFUL, SO WONDERFUL!
Thank you!
This is pretty fabulous! Love the personal details and quirkiness.
Leah – These details are wonderful – broken clasp and wine stain, the gas station, the house, “and something you couldn’t quite call love.” -bingo!! “Wildcard tastes” and “cosmic winks” – I’m glad she got to read your poem, and I hope she enjoys this one!
I echo what everyone has said. This so specific and original. No cliches here!
Love. I feel like this would perform very well. Thank you for sharing it.
I love how the detail and aside draws connections between the dream world and speaker at present (in the timeline of the poem: “I really didn’t know her all that well.” but also showing us some of the ways you did know her.
killer ending