Visitors
Visitors
Before the furnace imploded
and ducts sent smoke
up and out into the rooms,
twelve deer came to graze,
but left after two days.
A turkey hen came the next day,
circled the house twice, and then
disappeared in the forest.
Two rabbits, dancing the rabbit dance,
one hopping over the other the way
my father and brother did in a Dayton,
Tennessee club, clearing the floor amid
clapping and cheers.
Grandpa Jones came over to our table,
amazed that anyone still knew that old
folk dance.
Some warmer weather a rat snake
came out of the garage,
scattering grey squirrels ahead of it.
A bobcat came and looked through
three large, ground to roof windows,
and starred at me. I wished it would
return, but it hasn’t.
When warmer wether prevailed,
one humming bird gathered nectar
from the roses.
I put up two feeders.
Soon there were six more hummers,
fighting like children.
6 thoughts on "Visitors"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Great way to weave in nature and family. Love the comparison of rabbits dancing with father and brother. You have a true relationship with the world around you! Then you bring it back to family in the end (a humming family).
A lovely glimpse into the life that surrounds the house.
“A bobcat came and looked through
three large, ground to roof windows,
and starred at me. I wished it would
return, but it hasn’t.”
How cool!
I love your relationship with the animals. I love the casual friendliness and the everyday nature of the community. The time of this poem is wonderful!
I meant “tone” not time!
I love the details of the animals here, especially the economy and power of ending with the hummingbirds “fighting like children.”
your place sounds so invitingly pastoral but also funny–hummingbirds fighting like children