American Sentence LVIII
A woman boards the train with eighty stolen Jacksons stitched in bra cups.
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A woman boards the train with eighty stolen Jacksons stitched in bra cups.
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Exciting! An entire story and world unfolds in one sentence. Love it!
Yes !!!!
Extraordinary
storytelling.
Would love to know where this goes. Excellent set up.
I got on the train right behind her. What happens next??
I have so many questions about the woman, but also about the narrator and who’s seeing her board the train or if it’s omniscient. Very intriguing.
amazing how you capture so much with so few words!
I want to continue the story! Great American sentence.
Thanks for riding the train, y’all! Your comments are encouraging and bring me great delight! I continue to be surprised each day when I sit on the train and watch the passengers already and newly boarded, settling in and showing a hint of themselves.