Weed Control
Two raised beds, one with cherry tomatoes
and peppers, the other gone wild, abounding
with weeds, a failed organic compost
of wood shavings, food scraps, coffee grounds.
In the plastic faux whiskey barrel halves
a crowd of pungent mint, the other has
a strawberry struggling to adapt.
Nosy dogs, dandelion fur, causes
for my concern, leaves wilt, soil dries, stems bend,
not a question of will squirrels come for
the ripening fruit, take single bites, but when.
The earth spins on and on, hour after hour.
There’s so much to worry about each day
when in the end one has so little say.
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Form and cadence.
So much good. The stanza break really works, the ” not if but when ”
worded so succinct.
It makes me ask for a crown of these deep garden musings. 🙏
Phenomenal writing.
Another garden poem! More rhymes! Both yummy.
I especially love this: “not a question of will squirrels come for
the ripening fruit, take single bites, but when.” They’re clever little creatures. Great write!
The words make up a garden of structure and abandon. Delicious language.
I want to eat this poem. But everything is imbued with persona, it is cannibalism.
lol, yes! to:
not a question of will squirrels come for
the ripening fruit, take single bites, but when.
Very tight and also a delight to read.
Great poem! What a wonderful metaphor! And oh, that title. The last stanza. With all the rich imagery. Perfect.