American Sentence LIX
A teenager, lost inside last year’s hoodie, crayon in hand, draws home.
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A teenager, lost inside last year’s hoodie, crayon in hand, draws home.
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i LOVE lost inside last year’s hoodie
Okay, this one is fire, Pam!
Yes, the hoodie is perfect, Pam.
Putting a crayon in the teenager’s hand is a beautiful way to reveal the child within, not the adult emerging. Perfect.
Thanks for riding the train, y’all! Your comments are encouraging and bring me great delight! I continue to be surprised each day when I sit on the train and watch the passengers already and newly boarded, settling in and showing a hint of themselves.
What to me is great about this one? No need to say the teen is lonely. The crayon says it all.