Alien Nation
tech’s infiltration plot
disintegration
isolation
planting us alone together
gone are the daze of standing in the kitchen
hanging onto the turqoise wall phone
talking on and on to a high school chum after a day together
now just a memory my light up princess phone
a teen’s lifeline
amidst a French provincial lavender canopy room
the gotta have it now urgency
of our fake emergency break-in calls to Mom
busting a busy line
most of all the untethered freedom
of being untied to a hand held device
that tracks and knows exactly where one is
the loss of a smiling hi with a perfect stranger
who becomes
a friendly passerby
most are not where they are when they’re there
instead robotically talking to someone and missing the
someone who’s right in front of them
we’ve become a nation of
password junkies
swimming
alone together
8 thoughts on "Alien Nation"
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I love the nostalgia in this poem, the details are great. And the theme of technological disconnection is really important.
If you’re still editing, I’m wondering if the second to last verse is really needed? The rest of the poem shows what that verse says without needing to tell us.
Thank you for your comments I appreciate your feedback. Yes, I am ever editing! xoxoxo
Relevant and relatable. The more rapidly technological connections advance, the more disconnected we become. Increased online involvement and dependence on virtual communication conversely magnifies withdrawal from reality, alienation of self and others, and shallow relationships to all beings (human and nonhuman, alike). Convenience of digital connection undercuts beneficial person-to-person encounters. Concrete, tangible imagery. Sense of urgency is palpable. Grateful you are participating in Lexpomo. With metta
Thank you Larry, your insights and comments are so helpful and reinforce my deeper awareness!
So true! I love”being untied to a hand held device.”
ME TOO!!!! Thank you for your words!
This poem makes me contrast my idea of “then” with “now” all through reading —and it made me realize that way back when the phone was an “other” but now it is an “extension” of us–with very little separation…..perhaps that is the scary part your poem highlights. I love the nostalgic recollections and descriptions of the wall phone and princess phone. You paint a picture so well of what you are seeing and give it to us clearly. Nice—Thanks for your poem!
Ann, thank you for your reflections on this poem. I’ve really been feeling the dis-connect more than ever. It is now an “other” in our sociological interplays, a person to person wedge of dis-connecting!