Low Coal
my landlord needed a rental
floor to be repaired
so he brought his cousin Jake
to send under the house
with me
crawling on our knees then
shimmying on our backs
pulling six by six
beams, concrete bricks, wedges
and a single Eastwing Hammer
with J A K E written on the side
my landlord leaned at the opening
neither could hear
so I relayed information
between the two
Jake kept calling me
or himself Kemosabe
while we jacked up the floor
stacked the original stones
that had held for so long
smooth perfect squares
we didn’t use the new concrete
blocks bought for the job
Jake said God could
only make stones that perfect
and strong
when we finished
Jake told me this was all low coal
my landlord agreed
from his square of light
both being ex coal miners
men now aged out
Jake smiled at me
both out of breath and covered
by dirt, webs, and sweat
said what they had said in the mines
“it may be hell to you
but home to me”
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I love this! Words stacks as solidly and securely as those “smooth perfect squares” of original stone.
I like this poem a lot.
Whole story here. Great. Hope you got $ off your rent.