Strange (Bar) Communion
Shuffle of feet, rattle of unseen
silverware and flatware and glass.
Speaking (so very much talking),
hushed and hurried and raucous, and
listening (perhaps listening) eyes devouring eyes
and movement, forming, reforming, flanking,
attack and defense (and alcohol) lines pushing and pulling,
vying for position along the precipice
of social interaction…
and everything I am is
penitence in the elbow
barely touching your elbow;
worlds without words
in that prayer.
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I love this poem: all the anonymous movement in the first stanza, entrance of the speaker in a coda, and the play of “prayer” and “communion.”
Thank you, Gaby.
Was my prayer in the writing.
Usually the eyes get all the glory of wordless communication. I like that the elbow gets its due here.
Yes! Not that it would have been as powerful with hust any one, but absolutely was here. Thank you.