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I remember thinking your eyes
looked like an eclipse,
dark and luminous,
across the kitchen table.
You laughed at my laughter,
and that night,
I put my wishes in a bottle
and sent them to sea.
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Beautiful! I love how this poem will never end, as the reader is left to imagine the final destination of the bottle of wishes!
Love this!
Concise and clear-eyed. I love how the final image carries onward.