Monarch
To walk among the butterflies
inside the temporary exhibit
at the Louisville Zoo,
down the hill from the lone lobo
pacing the limits of his enclosure,
and the white rhino, among
the last of her species,
is to see words take shape,
flit from mouth to ear,
some missing, landing
on stems of arrowroot and sage,
others skittering to the floor
not to rise again,
such as those when I said
my happiness
is not dependent
on you.
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This poem floats beautifully. It holds a quiet power. I especially love this:
“is to see words take shape,
flit from mouth to ear,
some missing, landing
on stems of arrowroot and sage,
others skittering to the floor
not to rise again,”
Oh!
I have seen you,
with a thousand
different faces.
‘To walk among the butterflies”
I love the turn on the last stanza! And:
flit from mouth to ear,
some missing, landing
on stems of arrowroot and sage,
You had me at “to walk among the butterflies” and you kept me until the very end– “my happiness is not dependent on you.” This poem soars!
The butterfly and witness
Sorry, I punched too soon. The butterfly’s witness inhabits this poem and contrasts it’s revealing ending. Another great piece.
This is filled with beautiful images and depth of meaning. Love it!
love the irony of the title!
I can feel the butterflies and the words landing on and all around me, and it feels so good!
Subtle yet profound, thanks for sharing Bill!
That ending came out of left field, which is a signature of your work, Buddy.