Six, just breaths before work come Monday morning
the slow-rolling hills of the flesh-toned sunset,
sluthering off to make manifest
daybreak elsewhere—so
for the sorrel now, gone
to seed and groping the
sky as a weed might,
weeks before yule tide
saps the grass greige,
souring leaves. Your brother’s
small pall then
sprawls out
under the stars,
like scars against
woodgrain feigning a
movement. Barleycorn
chuckles and buckles in
stone as your feet go stubbornly
scudding up over the buck-toothed
concrete, plots of sidewalk chalk just
humbly plumbing the pockmarked rock
for a feisty dog kennel grotto or cat house,
any scarce space that the scattershot
rain, the rain we’re here without
hourly maybe, should
dare never penetrate—
digging for clams.
And the theatre mask hooligans beckon
the rain and the stars stand still for an instant,
settle, gangway for the gibbet, the crane, or the
trebuchet—which-
ever route Jupiter
Morgan’s chosen this
rather concerningly sultry
Christmas morning—maybe
it’s Easter, Ascension, Feast
of St. Brigid, or All
Hallow’s Eve—
whatever day Jupiter Morgan thinks
is best, wan Houdini of death and
taxes, to honor or gravely sedate the
sunset stumbling back to its cave
so the stars can rage about
which smug gods they still
must coldly and soberly quiver
to slip against.
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You have very creative word choices which make you precise in what you are saying. “sluthering off to make manifest” — wonderful! And I love your internal rhyme of chuckles and buckles.
Wonderful work. Thank you for sharing!
Deeply pleasurable to read–E.E. said it well: the precision of the rhythm and movements you make are always a wonderful journey. I love the sounds of “for the sorrel now, gone/to seed” and many other great lines.
That last line, and the way you’ve spaced everything out, just gorgeous and so accurately portrayed that I can feel the early
morning in this -a high compliment from me.
Also, still, is the stars
and woodgrain and your brothers grave all laid out in some peaceful timelessness contrasted so we’ll with the hilarious (and accurate) idea that a bank man has so shaped the world that even the God’s must somehow conduct
their love affairs hereto as something stolen and secret.
I feel like I’ve entered the quietness of your inner realms
and felt for an instant the electric hum of a tea kettle igniting and heard somehow your very footsteps as they dragged themselves resentfully into the fray.