A Story
A Story
As you read this silent work,
imagine you are young,
you decide what age.
Imagine it to be in rural,
you decide the state and county,
and it is hot inside your home.
Image your neighbor invites,
you choose the number of community
members to his house.
Imagine that he has hung a white sheet
on the wall of his white farmhouse
and has chairs in rows for the audience.
You have come to watch a movie.
It is the silent film:
The Great Train Robbery.
Imagine there is no pianist,
theater organist, or orchestra
to play music.
Think of it as your first movie–
ever, and you are excited.
You must be excited.
When the steam powered train comes,
picture the smoke rising
and trailing behind it.
Imagine a big man,
you picture him,
on a white stallion.
He rides up, unseen,
he is drunk, you figure how
you know that…
He pulls out his pistol,
and shoots the robber
on the screen.
The movie is stopped.
The man has never seen a movie before.
He says he is on his way
to the Sin Lot,
and you are left
to figure out why.
14 thoughts on "A Story"
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Wow! i love this journey you took us on! I was right there feeling it and watching it!
why did I comply until stanza 5, then pout that I didn’t get to pick the movie?? By the end I was glad of it !
The 2nd person narration is working HARD here. Nice!
I like the way you engage the reader
This poem really gathers steam as it goes along! You set the scene so well, and I love the perspective of “you”
Agree with others with the choice of you and how this peom gathers steam.
Love the dark and light in:
Imagine that he has hung a white sheet
on the wall of his white farmhouse
and has chairs in rows for the audience.
Pam, you are to be complimented for your perspectives… They pleased me…
You draw us in with the perspective and I was left agape at the man shooting the picture–it arrested me!
I am happy that you were arrested with this. That makes you one of the robbers…
Linda, thanks for attending the show. Believe it or not it actually happened…
inge, I am happy stayed with this until the end…
Joseph, sometimes 2nd person words and sometimes it doesn’t…Thanks…
Pat, it’s great when the reader is engaged… I wondered how many would be.
Sylvia, I appreciate that the you stayed in there until the steamed stopped moving…