Pulling Threads at 4 AM
When the morning birds begin the chants
to raise the sun from its twiggy nest
I recognize the party is about to start,
an end to the hours I enjoy best,
the dropped needle quiet of middle night
the last of the rowdies off the road,
raccoons not yet fiddling with the garbage can lid.
So many times I’ve woken in that void
and needed a moment to locate the cave wall
in the pitch, interpret its grit,
find the guide rope to get my bearings again.
I start coffee and sit at the table
with yesterday’s unopened mail,
thinking of credit card offers, the news from DC,
trying to understand how the two
are umbilically connected, thoughts put on hold
while the coffeemaker wheezes
through the last of its drip.
My father’s last morning,
struggling to breathe, forced oxygen
hissing from the pillows in his nose,
my mother and I told him he could go.
Let go, we’ll be okay, we said. Let go.
And he did.
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Beautiful, Bill. The swerve of the final stanza really works.
Bill, this poem is heartfelt and beautifully crafted.
“So many times I’ve woken in that void
and needed a moment to locate the cave wall
in the pitch, interpret its grit,
find the guide rope to get my bearings again.”
My goodness. I read that several times. Thank you for sharing this with us.
The world at 4AM definitely feels different, yeah.
you articulate the state of aloneness with thoughts that won’t leave you alone, thoughts that haunt in the middle of the night
Beautiful. Definitely tugged the threads of my heart. Well done.
thoughts that tug at 4am beautiful written
The poem turns in the last stanza and it’s devastating effective.
Didn’t expect that ending, but it’s powerful. I also loved the way you described the “dropped needle quiet of middle night.”
aw man, best things! It’s like “Greatest hits of Bill Brymer for 3 cents, Colombia Record Company – just buy more!” And fuck, the hard right of the last stanza, the analogy of morning as vinyl, the wheezing coffee maker, all building up to the breathing of your father. exquisitely knit brother.
Quiet and confident voice.
You invite us in and offer us, as truth spills out like real cream. And we listen, and we hear.
Great poem sir.
Beautiful and heart wrenching.
Agree with Coleman, “quiet and confident voice”
lovely entry into 4am time, “the dropped needle quiet of middle night”,
Powerfully wrought image:
while the coffeemaker wheezes
through the last of its drip.
My father’s last morning,
struggling to breathe, forced oxygen
hissing from the pillows in his nose,
Hits home, Bill. Sounds a lot like my morning routine — and the conversation I had with MY father. Thank you for helping me remember.
You had me at “twiggy nest’! You are a master at crafting a poem. I love that I never know where you are going. Always a heartfelt surprise!
That “dropped needle,” “that void,” “thoughts put on hold” — all evoke such strong emotion and a glimpse into understanding a letting go that was immensely painful. Such a visceral poem, so well executed.
This has such understated complexity. I love how we can follow the train of thought from a universal experience to a deeply personal moment. Thank you.