Splash, Play, and Paw-Deep Joy
Hickman Creek, Jessamine County, KY
Omit thee electronics, I’d rather play with my dog Onyx (Black Labrador Retriever)
Splish, splash like a toddler, he believes he’s an otter
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Aren’t Labradores wonderful??? I love this.
Just a thought, what if you said — my black Labrador, Onxy, and omit the parentheses? It’s just a thought. (Feel free to ignore.)
I’m always open to suggestions, feedback, and/or constructive criticism! I agree 100% it does improve the poem. Will change in the future. The allotted time for adjustments has passed for LEXPOMO however. THANKS
Do it on more of my poems, thanks!
Poetry is a personal journey, isn’t it? And sometimes a suggestion bumps me in a good direction. <3
Sure, the time on this one for LEXPOMO has indeed passed (it is so frustrating when I got back and look at a poem and think, "Oh, gosh, I shoulda…" LoL BUT KEEP WRITING!
Nice! I can see it.
Such a joyful use of language.
Oh, LOVE LOVE this imagist poem. I’ll never forget it! Thank you!