Reconstitution
One Hundred court stenographers,
each trained by
the same online course,
(recorded in a basement in Lincoln, Nebraska)
race to input
the full lyrics of
“Ice, Ice, Baby”
in an attempt
to crown a valedictorian.
God’s marble collection,
One Hundred of them,
spill from the vase
of plastic flowers
in which she stores them,
(God obviously being a sixty-four year old
woman with Princess Diana’s hair
as reflected in her home decor)
clatter down granite stairs,
a stampede of aggies and cat eyes.
One Hundred ordinary gray mice
learn ballet
(lacking the rhythm
necessary for tap)
and congregate on a June afternoon
to recite
on the corrugated roof
of a Little League dugout.
One particularly observant mockingbird,
hearing the three hundred,
calls back, reproducing
the sound of raindrops
wetting the shingles above
my attic bedroom.
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Very interesting. I like your use of sensory information (sound and sight). That last strophe kicks ass!
One little suggestion which you are free to ignore. That second strophe needs to be tightened up. It lacks the clarity, the immediacy of the rest of the poem. Here’s a thought…does it belong in a different poem? Ponder that.
This is a really cool poem!
Great insight, I appreciate the feedback immensely. Thanks and will consider!