in the birdbath
see the little two flit
and splash, kicking
and flapping and looking
to me like they know
the best thing to do
on a morbid hot day
when everything
presses against you
and you feel time as an
illusion alluding to
your eventual end
and why does it matter
anyway because our hand
basket is gaining speed
is shake it off
in this place together
while I, inside these
pristine walls, wonder
from my window
do they know or
do they even care
(or do they possibly prefer)
it’s dirt?
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– From To Be of Use by Marge Piercy
7 thoughts on "in the birdbath"
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I love how this starts so simply with a familiar image and then expends into a more vast world. Lovely!
Woderfilled and holy.
We are who we are. I love the vast space between the joyous birds living in the world where they are most comfortable and the viewer- the outsider – not believing their joy could be as great as mine as their world is.
The contrasting POV’s make this poem exquisite.
I love Marge Piercy’s work!
Steve Cope mentored me for many years (bless him!), and something he only need to tell me once was, “Let the thing BE,” e.g. no similes, no “looks like,” or “seems like.” Something to consider: what happens if you remove “and looking to me like?” Read it outloud with and without those five words several times. You may like it best as is, but give the alternative some thought.
I enjoy the piece in its wholeness. A perfectly realized thought and image.
Read in a breath. Perfect.