The Limestone Speaks
We are swimming
In the shallow sea
Until the tectonic crash
Of continents occurs
And the ancient Appalachians
That dwarf Everest
Grow and drain
Our home so we settle
[through calcite caverns…bubble…sinking holes]
I am a pile of stones
On the loam
From limestone slabs
Beneath the ground
The one emerges who sees
And I become a wall
Dry stacked in rows
Shaped by lines and chisels
And hammers until I form
The bones of the field
From this our crops emerge
And our cattle are cataloged
When the car crashes
My stones scatter
You are the eye that sees
My shape restored
From ancient shards
And weathered memories.
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Impressive! This piece has depth and breadth that invites readers to read it again and again. Great write!
Wow ! The couplets really work here !!!! Great content and great writing.
Thanks for sharing this one.
This an excellent poem from beginning to end. I love it that you are speaking as the limestone. So many precise details! I love that you get tectonic plates, calcium caverns & sinking holes in there
And the car crash at the end! You get an A-plus!
Bud, I love how you’ve encompassed eons in this poem. You situate the poet and reader in the sweep of creation!
Hmmmm…some really strong images here.
I love the “cattle are cataloged” and “bones of the field.
A few questions:
-Who are the “you” and the “we” in the poem?
-Would you consider opening the poem with “I am a pile of stones?” Just a thought.
Thanks for the feedback and good questions that came from close reading. I will ponder those!
great passage of time and the movement in creation.
love: You are the eye that sees/My shape restored
A prayer, a meditation, giving way to contemplation. Very beautiful Bud.
What great movement here. I love how this poem goes inward at “I am a pile of stones/On the loam…”
Love the personification of limestone and images.
Great personification that leads the reader to a greater understanding!