Sorry to Inform You
The poem died on the table. No attempts
to resuscitate were made, it had given up
trying to be whatever it was meant
to be: sonnet, pantoum, heroic couplets.
It never achieved in life what it hoped to achieve,
put down on a post-it stuck to the fridge,
a place in a eulogy, read on TV,
in a book of secular messages.
As we all, this poem reached for the stars
only to fall tumbling into the sea.
Congratulations for getting this far.
Regret that it never realized its dreams.
There might be use for some parts, title, feet,
what this poem lacked was a steady heartbeat.
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I love the playful lament. That poor poem dying on the table. Been there. There’s plenty of life in this, though. Thanks for writing and sharing this one, Bill!
Awwwww may they rest in piece.
I personally think some of thw rhymes could be helicoptered to an operating table somewhereeas well.
Great write.
unique lament that had me smile and groan in agreement.
Love:
this poem reached for the stars
only to fall tumbling into the sea.
YOU KILLED SONNET! YOU BASTARD!
Brilliant.
I am laboring on a response to your efforts.
You managed to write a poem out of your fallen stars!
You killed it with this one, Bill! 😉
Seriously, this is clever and engaging and so true.
Nice meta. The last line brings home the truth – a poem has to have a heartbeat.
We’ve all been there, yeah. This was a fun one!
And the poets gather at graveside, all believing in a prosodic afterlife. Love this, Bill. Who among us hasn’t felt this way about what we write?
great eulogy for the poem we all strive for!
And yet it lives on, its ghost returned in this spectral form beautiful enough to wear at the Met Gala, you sly dog.
Oh my gosh. I’m experiencing poem-envy.
Love this.
“The poem died on the table.”
One more experience could breathe life back into it Bill, keep it securely tucked away for another day!
Bill, such a relatable lesson ~
permission to dismantle a piece
and start all over again . . .
resourceful retrieval thank you