The Sunshine Flower Shop on Tates Creek
He’s got three legs.
I named him Lieutenant Dan,
the owner of the flower shoppe tells me.
And I want to salute
this golden retriever,
to thank him for his service,
to tell him how moved I am
that he didn’t give up.
He nudges his muzzle into my hand,
exposes his soft animal belly,
wiggles his spine
among fallen begonias and impatiens
and I rub his belly
until he smiles.
-Marianne Peel
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Such a well-written vingnette! It’s great to read you in LexPoMo!
Thanks, Linda… I’m late to the party, but happy to be here!
Beautiful write! I just love this!
Thanks so much, Winter Dawn!
I love the careful (and also relaxed and natural-feeling) movement of this piece! Cheers for Lt. Dan!
Cheers!!!
Yes! Cheers to Lt. Dan, and this poem!!
Thanks… and cheers!!!
This is excellent! Thank you so much for sharing this.
Big thanks to you!❤️❤️
Always love a dog poem!
Me too, Linda!!
Conversational, comfortable and tender.
A lot told with few words
“until he smiles.” 😃