Lest Ye Be Judged
At the concert, I wince
as the grandmother pierces
the dim light with her flash.
As the overeager
couple post on Facebook
sharing this moment with
all their friends who are in
bed already. I am
with my daughter
who is eighteen years old.
She bought me these tickets
for Christmas not knowing
the band, beyond the fact
the singer was the son of
a great bard and poet.
Even more delightful
than the music is
to sit next to her again.
I try not to judge the
glare of the phone in front
of me…can’t she dim, dammit?
“The audience theme tonight
is not knowing how to
use their phones, am I right?”
I say to my daughter.
She gently nods and then
minutes later even
more gently presses the
record button that I
neglected to press
having spent at least a
minute quite busily
trying to catch the moment.
13 thoughts on "Lest Ye Be Judged"
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Though I wasn’t at the Jakob Dylan concert last night, I love how you capture being there with your daughter and dealing with generational gaps
Clever! Was the concert The Wallflowers?
Yes. Wonderful how you did capture this, the details make this.
Personal and again wonderful.
Love the title foreshadowing.
It sure was, Mike!
Nice one Bud! I like the turn at the end, like a selfie.
Good ending! I love how the poem is linenated in skinny tercets. It stretches the reading time and adds suspense.
Very clever. Great read.
Enjoyed this. Very relatable. We do often end up humbling ourselves.
Fun!
I like the pairings: your daughter and you//the singer, son of the bard and ooet
*poet
There’s a great humor and balance to this piece! I love the story you achieve here.
funny, true, and lovely capturing of father and daughter!