A Girl Who Turned Left
We rode through bone-frame houses,
beams like ribs not yet covered with skin.
I said we were on another planet.
You told me who you wanted to kiss.
On kiddie bikes
we looped the cul-de-sac until the air turned gold
and the rebar started looking like prophecy.
You had pockets full of lip gloss and smoke.
I had a portfolio with unicorns on it.
You let go first.
The handlebars, the fairy tale, the gasp.
That summer you rode ahead into
boys who smelled like menthols and sea salt.
I stayed behind to name the clouds
and memorize the scaffolding.
I imagined you trapped on Mars.
You offered me a cigarette. I said
I’d rather read Wuthering Heights again.
Recently I saw a girl who moved like you,
like she owned the place.
She laughed like you did: sharp,
like someone braking in reverse.
What are you doing today?
I hope it’s something real,
messy and ordinary and alive.
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I love the way you wind through these memories, and then push forward to the present. So many rich details, and the sense of so much still between the lines.
thank you 🙏
Great title– and wonderful journey through memories. Those last two lines– lovely!
Beautiful and evokes a time.
Ours was tag on minibikes in the bursting subdivisions of the valley.
“We rode through bone-frame houses,
beams like ribs not yet covered with skin.”
Thank you for the memory.
This poem has the feel of an epistle top to bottom. The details and broken line counts are stellar.
Again as always your word choices astound. Another great poem.
P.s. the second to the last stanza.
Oh!!!!! Got me.
thank you
thank you
Love “bone-frame houses,/beams like ribs not yet covered with skin…”
Thank you 🙏