Summer Syntax
sweat is the word of the day
pulling weeds in all their abundance
clearing the road bank of poison hemlock
moving bales of hay to the garden
makes me as sodden as the air
in this season of endless showers,
it’s a salty soaking with a relief factor
of low hanging clouds
that might pour forth
at any moment
and
the knowledge that throughout
the day there is the cool pool
of recent rain water
collected in the fifty gallon tank
under the eave of the barn
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‘Sweat’ is indeed the word of the day.
Love the constancy held in routine tasks and the reward.
The sweet relief in “cool pool” and how those words draw out and slow the reader down.
I love all of the repeated S-sounds in the first half of this poem and how that “and” bisects the poem.
Your imagery is always top tier, Jim.
the lines make me long for that “cool pool” at the end of the day