Sept 30, 1917
The date sweeps across the top
of this postcard from the Berkshires,
unfurled like a famous name
on the Declaration of Independence.
It’s a proud penmanship, written for
remembrance, its loops and lines
sweeping, not creeping, across the card,
its sender hoping to be noticed.
On the front a colorfully painted scene
of a motor car rumbling across
a stone bridge over the Deerfield River,
the “modern-day Mohawk Trail” – back then.
“I’ve been over a good part of the U.S.,”
Carpin writes, “but here in the
Berkshire Hills is some of the most
beautiful scenery I ever saw.”
Not that it matters, but elsewhere
that day Germans and British killed
each other along the Menin Road
Ridge in battle-brittle Belgium.
Gotha bombers pummeled London
by night, their pterodactyl wingspans
grasping the sky as gunners in forward
cockpits fired from the creatures’ eyes.
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Lee,I like the parallel of the date
And the description.
that last stanza is gold!!!
I can really see this:
Gotha bombers pummeled London
by night, their pterodactyl wingspans
grasping the sky as gunners in forward
cockpits fired from the creatures’ eyes.
Loving this series, Lee. You’ve got hold of a good one. Your ability to render what you see is so strong in these.
This description: “It’s a proud penmanship, written for
remembrance, its loops and lines
sweeping, not creeping, across the card,
its sender hoping to be noticed. ”
WOW!
You have a special talent for writing about history in a modern and visceral way.