What’s a Pantoum?
Here, poet, take a first line.
Just know it’ll fold back in.
You’re here to weave words
like a basket, tight as you can.
Just know it’ll fold back in,
layers of dough and butter
like a basket, tight as you can.
It takes time, patience, practice.
Layers of dough and butter.
Poems can be delicate as croissants–
It takes time, patience, practice
to get some forms to do what you want.
Even when on the side that reads,
you’re here to weave words.
Everyone crafts their own verse:
Here, poet, take a first line.
16 thoughts on "What’s a Pantoum?"
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Fantastic! “Just know it’ll fold back in” is so apt. Nice one!
I love the images – the baking and the basket
Delightful!
Very clever!
Well done! I’m inspired to write one now. I’ve tried before but always failed. Good poem and very accessible.
Pantoums are hard!!
Somehow I managed two this year!
Can’t wait to see what you write. 💗
You have a real talent for crafting such imagery rich poems, the weaving of baskets and croissants alike is so clever!
Love your initiative to use forms and teach poets this year
Love the bread metaphor – works so well here. And we’re on a wavelength – I posted a pantoum today, too!
Oh I love to hear that!
I know where I’m going now …
And it sounds like I’ll be reading one of the best things since sliced bread, hee hee.
Nice poem!
I have tried and failed to write a pantoum.
I am inspired by your excellent example.
Adore: Here, poet, take a first line.
Thank you very much.
Something simply clicked this year that hadn’t before.
This year I discovered I could write a couple pantoums. 😊
I hope you’re discovering delightful new pathways for yourself, too.
Thank you!! I learned something new…
Now I can make myself
Crazy trying.
I do love your pantoum!
You’re so welcome!
Love when someone gets to learn.
I’m grateful the pantoum pollen was in the air and I was able to learn, this year, how to CHANNEL writing one.
It has taken years.
This was inspired by responses from friends to the poem I posted on June 10, if you’re curious.
Worlds of luck to you! You’ve got this.
I love how artfully constructed and instructive this piece is.