Three-Mile Loop at the Horse Park
We walk by pasture upon still pasture
of horses grazing, swarms of flies
on their muzzles, a plump of geese
on the lake, one, head tucked beneath
a wing, dozes. Men and their dogs sit on the bank
motionless, watching their bobbers.
A red-headed woodpecker chases a bug
threading the black-painted fence posts.
A hawk drowses on the branch of a dead tree,
tracking us with a slight tilt of its head.
Another is wheeling high in the sky. A third
drinks from a muddy puddle.
A rabbit freezes in place as we pass.
When we cross the bridge to leave,
some twenty birdsongs later, sweaty and tired,
a heron lifts from the pond below us
and glides to the far shore
to roost for the night.
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Love the choice of tercets for a poem about a three-mile loop. Great photo, too!
I agree with Bill. Fabulous choice, Gaby! And that picture…wow!
“A rabbit freezes in place as we pass.”
You sure got it!
You paint a very nice picture with this one!
The first stanza sets the tone perfectly. It goes on perfectly from there. Many silent or hushed moments — a drowsing hawk, horses grazing, men watching bobbers, rabbit freezing, heron lifting.
I echo the above sentiments.
Thanks for taking me along on this walk – and I love the shadow and light in the photo, too!
Nice break in my day reading this poem.
Echo every one’s thoughts.
Adore: “some twenty birdsongs later”
I love “plump of geese” and the idea of counting time by birdsongs.
I love that picture–and also “a plump of geese” <3
Such a delicious walk and poem. Thanks for taking us along, Gaby!
I was at the Horse Park recently. Gorgeous place, as is your poem.
So soothing and lovely. And measuring time in birdsongs? Yes 🙌