June Forecast XIX: FLOOD WATCH
This data collector, binge watched all spring,
is void of opinions— stuck in the ground, foot dyed
clay orange, with creeping thyme creeping by.
This aggregator spills out harsh facts,
of the lavender bushes whose feet will rot
if left too wet— of humans downstream
along a steep path who might be swept away.
Surely, later this summer, joy will spill out—
it will tell of those fed, nourished, bathed in delights.
But for now, this open square in the earth warns.
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Love this, Michele. Clear-eyed but room left for hope.
I really love this line
Foot dyed clay orange with creeping thym. My imagination goes in various directions with this one!
You’ve energized the “forecast” with language!
I love the suredness of “is void of opinions” and then the poem is able to express feeling around it: love “creeping thyme creeping by.”
Love:
this open square in the earth warns.
It takes skill to use “data collector” and “aggregator” in a poem and keep it engaging. You do!