American Sentence LXXIII
Although scored scars whitewash & hollow her, she still boards the train with him.
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Although scored scars whitewash & hollow her, she still boards the train with him.
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poignant from beginning to end!
A disturbing but necessary read. Brave.
A powerful testament to the human capacity to carry immense burdens.
Beautiful.
Terrific. I’ve had trouble getting on this form’s wavelength but you are reeling me in.
A winner from “although” to “still.”
Another horizontal haiku (at least syllable-wise)!
Loving this:
“Although scored scars white
wash & hollow her, she still
boards the train with him”
Evocative storytelling. Despite lived experiences, life moves on. Drawn to the rhythmic: “scored scars whitewash & hollow her.”