Not About Sorrow
I was going to write about sorrow but I
don’t like where that’s going,
don’t like how it conjures
the ambiguity of having and not having,
the ruin of mistake,
the mistake of ruin,
a voiceless groan of catastrophe
that never fully arrives
and never quite leaves,
weighing us down like a greatcoat
on a sunny day in August.
No, I’ll steer clear of sorrow.
I won’t give sorrow a story.
Stories are all lies, anyway,
we invent to cover the truth.
Yes, I’ll steer clear of sorrow.
Instead, I’ll keep my peace.
Doing so requires discipline.
All of us are disciples.
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I enjoyed this, Mike!
Especially like the line:
“Doing so requires discipline.”
Can be read
Doing (the act)
…SO requires discipline “
Or
Doing so (keeping the peace)
…requires discipline
Then, ending with
“All of us are disciples.”
Yes
Love this .. “weighing us down like a greatcoat/
on a sunny day in August.” Lots of truths in this one.
love:
“I’ll steer clear of sorrow.
I won’t give sorrow a story.”
This is an ode against sorrow that is pretty sad! Well done.
A language-playful poem about sorrow. Only you could pull this off, Mike!
the ruin of mistake,
the mistake of ruin, – !!!
Shew: “Stories are all lies, anyway,/we invent to cover the truth.” Love the wisdom here.
Love the wordplay here and the liminality of sorrow you touched on. Great piece.
Thank you all for your kind comments