Coleus on The Old Wood Porch
Color splashed along the rotted
floorboards of the old porch
as if the coleus plants were
abandoned, left to navigate
on their own, vining instead of bushing
traveling a splintered road.
The plants were huge in an array of
pots of ancient clay and porecelain charm,
some on tall iron plant stands, multi-colored
leaves draped down and curved along the
boards, stems covered, splatter of
raspberry reds, plum purples, lime greens.
The old nun came out in early morning
before Lauds the first liturgical hour and
communal breakfast,
to water and gently removed wilted leaves
that matched her aged hands, her
feet floating above the carpet of leaves.
She shuffled along the edge, like walking on
water, aluminum pitcher in hand,
dripping sustenance, each plant blessed
humble gesture of grace enshrined
a small piece of heaven.
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Coleus are so pretty! I like how you give them a life of their own “traveling a splintered road” on the porch. The nun is presented vividly and the “dripping sustenance” of the blessing. Wonderful!
Thank you, Sylvia. I am please the “life of their own” came through.
This poem is beautifully written. It’s so full of texture and detail. Even the title, Coleus on the Old Wood Porch, is full with character and texture.
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate the validating words.
Making coleus come alive and love the image of the nun giving them water.. well written!
Thank you, Linda. Your comments mean a lot to me and I appreciate the validation.
Exquisite!
Truly sings: left to navigate/on their own, vining instead of bushing/traveling a splintered road.
Yes! :
humble gesture of grace enshrined/a small piece of heaven.
Thank you so much, Pam. I appreciate your validating comments on my writing.
Depth of artistry expressed here is extraordinary, Virginia Lee Alcott. Musicality and affinity for all life is in abundance. Each coleus plant as well as the nun are “blessed/humble gesture of grace enshrined/a small piece of heaven.” I feel blessed for reading aloud this adroitly-crafted poem
Thank you, L. for your empowering comments. Wow. Very validating.
So many sympathetic details. I love “traveling a splintered road” and “removed wilted leaves/that matched her aged hands…”
Thank you very much, Shaun. I appreciate your validating comments.
Wonderful images. The nun’s movements, the rotten porch, the splintered road, are all wonderful details and so vividly rich.,
Thank you, Rosemarie. I appreciate the validation. It is always a good thing when readers recognize the images.