June Forecast XXI: Indefinitely—Hot, Hot, Hot
I hike into the cool hues of summer—
the bondy blue of the pond in the midst
of yellowing cornstalks, under the dark
spring green umbrella of oak-hickory
and black walnuts, into a peace
that only exists here. There’s nothing
to be forgiven in the forest. Not even
the foxes for feeding their young
that brother turkey whose sister now
pecks at grandmother grasshopper.
But we humans who peck at one another,
we have all sorts of textures of the law
of our land. We, having moral agency.
Or do we?
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I love all of the colors you present in the first half of the poem and how it turns around “There’s nothing/to be forgiven in the forest.”
I agree with Shaun’s comment. Musicality inherent in this thoughtful and well-crafted poem is emphasized when read aloud, Michele. Poignantly important question at conclusion: “But we humans who peck at one another,/we have all sorts of texture of the law/of our land. We having moral agency./Or do we?”
There is a progression from plants to animals to humans. The ending was unexpected, and thus powerful.
Love the question at the end, and the pecking of one another. Really a well-made poem.
“There’s nothing to be forgiven in the forest” is such a beautiful line.
I love the way your images throughout the poem envelope the narrator and the reader.